There was no rythm,the author was trying to express colors and a cotton field.I like this poem it talks about the world and a field of cotton as if the moon has flowerd.(Auggie.t sarah.a)
The poet doesn't have any rhythm nor any figurative language.The author was really trying to express colors and the cotton fields.What I really liked about this poem was that it was talking about my favorite season of the year winter. (Gabriel R. Vadnais Homeroom)
there is not a rhythm or a rhym.Yes because its is comparing how beutiful the world is to hoe beutiful life is.we liked how it expressed feeling and what it ment.
there could be any rhythm because you can make your own beat but no rhyme in the story. it gives a simile of the world, the sound and then it gives us a picture in are mind about a field of cotton. it felt calm and it made me feel in happy land.(Dylan Ogle, Kara Wood-Mrs.Pavelkas HR)
there was no rhyme or rhythem (i think.)there was no figuritive language in it.what we both liked about the poem is that it gave a picture of the winter and the field of cotton.
there was no rythm and the author was expressing his feelings about winter solitude.what we like most was how the author discribed how the moon bloomed(cameron b. tanner w.)
I didnt hear a rythm in this poem ......because the ather was expressing his feelings.....The poem was about winter ............This poem doesnt have alot of figurative language (Rebecca s. and Sarah A. Mrs.Burns HM)
NO there was no rhyme or rhythm because this is a Haiku poem. Yes there was a figurative language when he said "... a field of cotton -- AS if the moon had flowered." What I like most about this poem was how he described the cotton field as if the moon had flowered. (Pam Venezuela and Sakib Ahmed - Pavela)
There was not a rhyme, but there was some figurative language.I really liked how it talked about the moon flowering... It was a great way to describe snow.
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ReplyDeleteThere was no rythm,the author was trying to express colors and a cotton field.I like this poem it talks about the world and a field of cotton as if the moon has flowerd.(Auggie.t sarah.a)
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ReplyDeleteThe poet doesn't have any rhythm nor any figurative language.The author was really trying to express colors and the cotton fields.What I really liked about this poem was that it was talking about my favorite season of the year winter.
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there is not a rhythm or a rhym.Yes because its is comparing how beutiful the world is to hoe beutiful life is.we liked how it expressed feeling and what it ment.
ReplyDeletelizzie c. catlin s. (burns)
there could be any rhythm because you can make your own beat but no rhyme in the story. it gives a simile of the world, the sound and then it gives us a picture in are mind about a field of cotton. it felt calm and it made me feel in happy land.(Dylan Ogle, Kara Wood-Mrs.Pavelkas HR)
ReplyDeletethere was no rhyme or rhythem (i think.)there was no figuritive language in it.what we both liked about the poem is that it gave a picture of the winter and the field of cotton.
ReplyDeletesorry we forgot to put our names (taylor and kristina vadnias hr)
ReplyDeleteit talked about the moon blooming. the first one talked about the winter. jessica g jace m
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there was no rythm and the author was expressing his feelings about winter solitude.what we like most was how the author discribed how the moon bloomed(cameron b. tanner w.)
ReplyDeleteThere is no rhythm and the author was expressing his feeling. In the first stanza you could hear "w". Our favorite part was the field of cotton
ReplyDeletethere was no rythm and the authors feelings were great(by kyle.w austin.d)
ReplyDeleteI didnt hear a rythm in this poem ......because the ather was expressing his feelings.....The poem was about winter ............This poem doesnt have alot of figurative language (Rebecca s. and Sarah A. Mrs.Burns HM)
ReplyDeleteWe agree with Auggie and sarah, there was no rhyme and i liked how they described wrote the poems and was very discriptive in each stanza.
ReplyDelete(Brendan E. and Taryn N.-Burns)
NO there was no rhyme or rhythm because this is a Haiku poem. Yes there was a figurative language when he said "... a field of cotton -- AS if the moon had flowered." What I like most about this poem was how he described the cotton field as if the moon had flowered. (Pam Venezuela and Sakib Ahmed - Pavela)
ReplyDeletethere was no rhyme but i like how the made the poem. it was real good. i also liked the feild of cotton. (Hunter McDougal Jace Moerrison pavelka hr)
ReplyDeleteThere was not a rhyme, but there was some figurative language.I really liked how it talked about the moon flowering... It was a great way to describe snow.
ReplyDeleteya me two about the moon flowering
ReplyDeleteWe are reading this poem in class it's weird.
ReplyDeleteThere is no rhyme in this poem because the author is describing how he feels about the life ( I think )
ReplyDeleteWe read it in class as well and I don't understand this poem
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