for me it was okay it didn't rhyme but it did have some aliteration with the "s, y and ll sound" (dylan ogle-Mrs.Pavelka HR)P.S. did i do the right answers idk what the Question were, reply ;)
There hythm and there was figurative language, the author was explaining how still the water is. i liked how in this poem the author was telling how still the water is. the author made it sound like the water isn't usally still.
Yes there was a rhyme and itwas today and way. No figuative lanuage used in this poem.We liked how they said it was not good for water to be that way.(Joshua.C,Jimmy.T,Mrs.Vadnais Hr)
It does have a ryhme, today and way ryhme. there was figurative language, explaining about water. We like how the peot explained waters features(Sydnee C. Ahsley V. burns)
we liked it!yes there is a ryhme because today and way both have the ay sound.no it does not have figurative language because it does not compare 2 things.from what you get from it is that it is still and calm.we liked it because it had a ryhme and it was very calm and not exciting!
we loved it.... and there was a rhyme. it did not have figurtive language,there were trying to express that water is too calm and still. what we loved about this poem is that it expressed feelings. (ashleyG & StephanieR pavelka)
There is no rhyme, but there is a rhythm. We did not see any figurative language. What we like about it is that it is peacefull and calm. (Brooke B. Averie Z. HR Vadnais)
The poem has alliteration and two rhyming words so no real rhyme scheme. there was a certain rhythym. There was no figurative language. It was a good poem because it was about the ocean. perrin t. and tad s. (burns hmrm.)
Yeah we agree with Perrin we think it does have alliteration I think it has the sound w and,Auggie thinks it sound s.Why do think it is good because it is the ocean? I think the ocean is great it has so many great fetures. Espically the blue shining glistening water!!!! :) :)(Auggie.t Lauren .g mrs.Burns homeroom)
Yes it kind of did rhyme like the words today and way. No there was no figurative language. What I liked most about this poem was the way the poet describes the ocean that way. (Pam Venezuela and Sakib Ahmed -- Pavelka)
There wasn't much of a rhyme except for "way" and "today". There wasn't figuravtive language. What I liked most about the poem was the way the poet talked about the ocena, and the way he described it.
It had a rythem but not a rhyme.yes it did have fuguritive language the author was trying to express how still the water was.what i liked most about this poem is that it was worded well and it had a good rhythem and it was about water.(dillon e pavelka hr)
for me it was okay it didn't rhyme but it did have some aliteration with the "s, y and ll sound"
ReplyDelete(dylan ogle-Mrs.Pavelka HR)P.S. did i do the right answers idk what the Question were, reply ;)
There hythm and there was figurative language, the author was explaining how still the water is. i liked how in this poem the author was telling how still the water is. the author made it sound like the water isn't usally still.
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Yes, there was a rhyme, it was today and way. No there was not a figurative language. we like how it is worded(Alexander F, Jacob S, Vadnais HR)
ReplyDeleteYes there was a rhyme and itwas today and way. No figuative lanuage used in this poem.We liked how they said it was not good for water to be that way.(Joshua.C,Jimmy.T,Mrs.Vadnais Hr)
ReplyDeleteyes there is rhyme,but it does not use figurative language.what we liked about the poem is how it was worded(nolan.m carlos.t vadnais hr)
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It does have a ryhme, today and way ryhme. there was figurative language, explaining about water. We like how the peot explained waters features(Sydnee C. Ahsley V. burns)
ReplyDeletewe liked it!yes there is a ryhme because today and way both have the ay sound.no it does not have figurative language because it does not compare 2 things.from what you get from it is that it is still and calm.we liked it because it had a ryhme and it was very calm and not exciting!
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we loved it.... and there was a rhyme. it did not have figurtive language,there were trying to express that water is too calm and still. what we loved about this poem is that it expressed feelings.
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There is no rhyme, but there is a rhythm. We did not see any figurative language. What we like about it is that it is peacefull and calm. (Brooke B. Averie Z. HR Vadnais)
ReplyDeletewe thought it was strange. There was no type of ryhme in the poem. neither of us saw figurative language. (Dominique h. caylie.d Vadnais HR)
ReplyDeletethere wasn't a rhyme or rythem. it said a lot about the water being still.jessica g jace m-
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We Think That The Poem Has Alot Of the "ST" sound it has some rhyme like "still,still and today,way Kyle.W and Austin.D
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No rhyme or rythm.No figurtive language.We liked how discriptive it was.(Cody R. Curren W./Burns)
ReplyDeleteThe poem has alliteration and two rhyming words so no real rhyme scheme. there was a certain rhythym. There was no figurative language. It was a good poem because it was about the ocean.
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Yeah we agree with Perrin we think it does have alliteration I think it has the sound w and,Auggie thinks it sound s.Why do think it is good because it is the ocean? I think the ocean is great it has so many great fetures. Espically the blue shining glistening water!!!! :) :)(Auggie.t Lauren .g mrs.Burns homeroom)
ReplyDeleteYes it kind of did rhyme like the words today and way. No there was no figurative language. What I liked most about this poem was the way the poet describes the ocean that way. (Pam Venezuela and Sakib Ahmed -- Pavelka)
ReplyDeleteyes it rhymes and it does have rhythm he doesnt know why the ocean is so still (dillon,spencer mrs pavelkas hr0
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ReplyDeleteI agree the ocean is so still.And it is so soothing to hear the sound of the waves.
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There wasn't much of a rhyme except for "way" and "today". There wasn't figuravtive language. What I liked most about the poem was the way the poet talked about the ocena, and the way he described it.
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ReplyDeleteThere was only one ryhme in the poem and it was "way"and "today". And the poet describes the ocean. (Cameron C.,Ashlyn C.)
ReplyDeleteWe just wonted to reply to dylan o's comment about it not ryming i think it did
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we agreed with Cameron C and Ashlyn C that there was one ryhme [way and today] [Patrick.O KORYN.W]
ReplyDeleteIt had a rythem but not a rhyme.yes it did have fuguritive language the author was trying to express how still the water was.what i liked most about this poem is that it was worded well and it had a good rhythem and it was about water.(dillon e pavelka hr)
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