Monday, January 24, 2011

Cats

A cat can crouch, crash, and crawl
Or creep, cringe and cry out,
Causing concern and crisis,
Cunningly creating confusion.

27 comments:

  1. The sentences were all fairly short; it reminded me of how a cat can move, especially when it's hunting. There was also a repetition of the "c" and "cr" sound-alliteration-that was heard over and over again.

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  2. I really liked the poem; it reminded me of my cats Tango and Baker (Sally S-Burns' Homeroom)

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  3. The poem didn't really have rhyme, but it did have the "cr" sound a lot. I think the poet used the "cr" sound a lot to describe how cats move. I liked this poem because it was about animals. (Jon Paul, Jessica, Khelben-Ms. Pavelka's HR)

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  4. There was a rhythm because many of the words used a "c" or "cr" sound. The poet used a lot of alliteration so that readers could really "see" a cat and what it does in your head. The words in the poem remind me of my cat Oreo. (Kayla W., Miranda D., Gabriel R., Jacob S., Cody L.,Cameron F., Koryn W.-Ms. Vadnais' HR)

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  5. there was a rhyme in the story used as "c or cr"
    there was use of alliteration in the story and it made me see it in my mind about what the cat was doing (Dylan Ogle-Mrs.Pavelk's room) ; )

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  7. there was a rhyme in the story that at least had a c or cr.There was a lot alliteration thith the c.I cound use my imagination and see where all the cats where and how they moved (Mekayla G.Ms Vadnais)

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  8. There was a rhyme in the poem which was "c" or "cr". Figurative language that was used was alliteration throughout the whole story. This story makes me think about about what they were doing from looking at the action words.(Joshua.C:Mrs.Vadnais Homeroom)

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  10. In the poem there was a rhyme wich was "c" or "cr".throughout the story there was figurative language it was alliteration.The favorite thing I liked about this poem was the the verbs because it made me think about what the cat did.
    (Carlos R.,Christian B.,Pavelka Homeroom)

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  11. there ws a rhyme fo the "c and cr" sound and there was figurtive language by telling us what the cat was doing like, crouch, crash, crawl, and creep, crindge and cry out. and we like the story because kara and I like cats. ; )

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  12. There was alout of "c" and "cr" sonds in the poem. There was no ryhming invovled in the poem.there was no figurative language. (Dominique H. caylie.d Vadnais HR)

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  13. it has a lots of (c) words and there was some figurtive language we liked all the describing of cats in the poem.there was alot of rhyming in the poem. (kristina r. and taylor f.)

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  14. no there is not a rhythm or rhyme,there was a lot of figurative languagelike the 'cr' and 'c' sound and it was the cats doing stuff,we liked about it is its about cats creeping around (kaity m. and khelben g.-pavelka home room)

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  15. We Think That its saying wat cats can do, the Rhythm didnt really have any rhyme. it had the "CR" sound alot...
    Kyle.W/Austin.D BURNS homeroom.

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  16. There was no rhyme or rhythm.We heard "cr" a lot. It sounds like its playing.We liked the way it discribed the cats playing.(Cody R. and Curren W.)

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  17. its saying what cats do.there was not really a rhyme, but there was a rhythm because of the c and c and the cr created in the words. it was illiteration in the peom.
    delaney gventer, mahima joshi
    (burns)

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  18. It has alot of C's and cr's, And we like it because it is about cats, And it uses alot of alliteration, and I think it they used C and cr a alot because it describes how it moves so fast and smoothly.
    (Ashleigh karlis, Taya Ruby, kim brizuela)
    Hmrm: Pavelka

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  19. it did not rhyme but it did have a rhythm,yes ther was figurative language the author was trying to express the cats doing.i liked this peom because it was about cats

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  20. well i disareege becuse there is figertive lange(khelben g. HR:pavelka

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  21. i liked this poem because it rymed and i like cats. it was a good poem the author has good taste.(Jace Morrison Hunter McDougal pavelka hr)

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  22. There was a rythm,the rythm is in the alliteration because there is a repetition of the "c" and the "cr" sound.(David D.,Brayden C.)

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  23. we heard the cr sound alot so yes there was a rhyme and there was a figurtive language in there i like how the author described so many noises (ryan s and alex d vadnias )

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  24. We agree with Alex and Ryan. We also like how the author described so many noises.( Averie Z. and Brooke B. HR Vadnais)

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  25. We agree with Ryan and Alex because there was a rhyme and it was the "cr" sound as and we liked how the author desribed all these noises.(Jacob.S,Joshua C.,Mrs.Vadnais HR)

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  26. ther was a rythem but not a rhyme. yes i noticed figuritive language.the author was trying to express the cats doing.i liked this peom because it was about cats and it expressd it doing.(dillon e. pavelka hr)

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