Tuesday, January 18, 2011

Fog by: Carl Sandburg

The fog comes
on little cat feet.

It sits looking
over harbor and city
on silent haunches
and then moves on.

9 comments:

  1. There wasn't rhyme or rhythm, there is personification, and what we liked about the poem was what it meant. (Alexander F, Jacob S, Vadnais HR)

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  2. There was no rhythm or ryhme. there was personification, and what we liked about the peom that it remind me of a stray cat.(Nolan,M, Carlos,T Vadnais HR)

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  3. There was no rhyme or rythm.A fog is lurking around it figurative language was is at a cats feet and fog at a diffrent.It involved cats.
    mikal.r gedeon.n
    (mrs.pavelca)

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  4. 2 metaphors, 1 personification, has no rhyme pattern we liked how it described fog. he did use figurative language to show how fog moves.
    (Perrin T. and Tad S. Mrs. Burns)

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  5. there is no rhythem or rhyme,it shows that fog moves like a cat,what we liked most about it was that it tells where it lerks(kaity M.-stephanie R.-pavelka homeroom)

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  6. this poem was awesome (jessica g. pavelka hr)

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  7. we think that there is no rhyme in this poem no figurtive lanuage.ashlie g jessica g (pavelka hr)

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  8. there was not a rhyme and it made sence and all, but i did not get the poem that much i could understand some of it but they did a good job over all (Cody L. Vadnias)

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  9. I did like the poem there was not a rhime, but there was personification and I did like the poem alot I could realy see the cat and the fog and I LOVED it alot:)!!!!!!

    (Mekayla G.Vadnais HR)

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